This time, like the others, I couldn't find any mistakes in my classmate comment. He has nice expressions, good grammar, a lot of vocabulary and, better, he sais very interesting things!Congratulations!Andrea Patiño Vázquez 4ºB
I did't saw contruccions bad, only I saw bad word that STORIE and i think than is STORIES and MISTERIOUS and is MYSTERIOUS. The text is very good.Ana Cepeda Cardona 4ºB
FIRST PART:Line 2: It isn´t ``talk´´ . It´s ``talking´´ (I like talking)Line 3 : It isn´t taleks´´ . It´s ``talks´´Line 8 : It isn´t ``appear´´. It´s ``appears´´.Line 15: It isn´t ``any´´ . It´s ``a similar legend´´.Line 29: It isn´t ``appear´´ . It´s ``appears´´.Line 33: It isn´t ``belive´´ . It´s ``believe´´.Line 46: It isn´t ``for kill´´. It´s ``for killing´´.Line 49: It isn´t ``near to´´ . It´s ``near´´.Line 51: It isn´t ``wanted to lived´´. It´s ``wanted to live´´.Line 64: It isn´t ``it are´´ . It´s ``it is´´.Second part:Line 4: It isn´t ``I know not´´ . It´s ``I don´t know´´.Line 11: It isn´t ``other galician typical construction´´ . It is ``other typical Galician construction´´. Line 17: It isn´t ``a ecologic village´´. It´s ``an ecologic village´´.Line 18: It isn´t ``can to say´´ . It´s ``can say´´.The Fabio´s mistakes.Correction of Alberto Vázquez Rodríguez.
Well, now it's the turn to try to correct the essay that one of my classmates has done. This is the correction:- In the 1st line, it's "In Galicia there are lots of stories and legends" instead of "In Galicia are very historys and legends".- In the 4th line, it's "Other stories or legends" instead of "The others historys or legend".- In the 5th line is "Galicia has bigs monuments"·instead of "Galicia has a big monuments".- In the 7th line is "Other monuments" instead of "The others monuments".- In the 10th line is "Castros were destroyed" instead of "Castros was destroyed".- In the 11th line is "Galician stories are the funniest in the world" instead of "Galicia`s historys are the most funny the all world".- In the 12th is "I like living here" instead of "I like life here".Diego Pazos Castro 4thB